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Reviews for Because I Care

By : SailorPoison
  • From ANON - DS on September 20, 2004
    Hi

    Loved this story very much. It is very difficult to find GIJoe Slash anywhere. I liked how Shipwreck got all confused about Snake Eyes and was struggling to figure out his feelings. Just poor shipwreck's luck to end up on a mission with the one person he didn't really want to at the time:) Nasty how shipwreck got abused by the dreadnoughts. It would have been interesting to find out how Snake Eyes might have reacted to finding out about the assault on Shipwreck. From the way you worded it it sounded like maybe Shipwreck had been either assulted before or at least had experience with m/m sex. Enjoyed the teasing banter after Shipwreck's rescue “Don’t tell me, you need a real navy man to get us out? I can do that as soon as I get the energy to do it.” Really thought that was funny... Nice how Shipwreck finally admits his feeling for Snake Eyes before passing out. Poor Snake eyes left in the lurch for days...Kind of puzzled as to what the drug/poison was supposed to exactly do anyway. Very frustrating for snake eyes that bedside vigil not able to touch shipwreck to convey that he was there during the time he was unconcious due to causing pain. The Fever dreams were a bit amusing “Snake-eyes...... Don’t go.... there, they don’t serve good beer.” that was funny. I also loved how it ended with Snake-eyes just looks down and signs, “Because I care for you alot also.” Thud...Loved the story very much.


    there were some minor type o's in the story but most was ledgible...Coronal Flirt ? snicker i guess that is supposed to be Colonel Flint? truthfully I always thought he was a flirt:) Anyway using spell check or asking a beta for help can clear that up. My problem usually is Tenses getting confused when I write so I tend to ask someone to beta...sigh tenses always get me...

    Anyway it is nice to find some slash fic with two of my favorite characters in them. I do hope to see more from you in the future...Keep writing...:)



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